Sunday, May 18, 2008

Monday, 19th May

Today our group made the story line for our book. The book is called:
Make a wish star fish
There once was a starfish living in the sea.
“I am very lonely and sad.” said she.
One day she asked a turtle floating by
“Can you be my friend?” but he denied.

She was sad so she cried and cried
Then an angler fish came to her side.
“What is wrong, my dear?”
“I have no friends” and she shed a tear.

“Oh don’t be sad. Hmm I’ll I grant u a wish!”
“Would you really do that?” cried the starfish.
“Of course I would! What do you wish for?”
“I wish that I wasn’t lonely anymore.”

So the angler fish spun his light
And he revealed a brilliant sight.
Then another starfish suddenly appeared.
And the angler fish then disappeared.

The starfishes were very happy as they were now friends.
They played all day and night until the heart contends.
In the end, the starfish wasn’t lonely anymore,
She was happy as she had a friend to adore.
I really like our story line becasuse it rhymes and it's a great way to show a lonley starfish get a wish granted.

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